Not as Dark as it seems
I wrote a poem. Trust me, It’s not about suicide. 😉
Standing on a cliff
Looking down
I wonder how wonderful
the fall will feel so good
Looking down
leaning back, arms outstretched
The fall will feel so good
I cannot leap
Leaning back arms outstretched
longing for the freedom
I cannot leap
the sudden stop would kill me
longing for the freedom
looking down
the sudden stop would kill me
Standing on a cliff
I need to toy with it a bit… what do you think? It’s a type of poem where you re-use the lines.
Derringer Meryl [The fall] Out
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It makes me think of New Moon…I’m sure that’s not what you’re going for though. I have no idea about poetry.
Oh, good point. I was thinking of jumping and falling as more of a metaphor. Weird eh?
It is very beautiful as a metaphor, but I’m as simple as the day is long. I still thought of New Moon. LOL!